Originally Posted by NearlyDead

You twitch around too much.
that first twist that you made, you should have rotated your chest, so as to avoid
that loss of momentum when you landed, it also would have made the first kick better. It was alright, served it's purpose I suppose, but it could have looked better.
the second kick and landing was pretty nice, but again you moved pretty on erratically
around that last dm.

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