Self damage was kinda pointless, generic opener
first hit (the lfit) looks a bit like an unsuccessful attemp to dm
liked the next two hits, though it feels like you'd rather extend the elbow after the hit rather than contracting. But its k, seems pretty hard to do smoothly (tried couple times)
next hit looks a bit pointless. maybe not, but i do prefer booms/2dm hits over 1 dm ones.
liked the transition to the actual pose and the pose as it is. Should've kept it for a little more, it always seems unfinished to me when you can see tori falling at the end.
Enjoyed watching it, n1