Well, overall i think that the replay had too much grab. Besides that you should try to go for booms. You seem to be able to build up speed pretty fast and playing online with you i know you can improvise. Try to get some hits in with out grab and go for more dm's.
7/10
That was really messy, try to clean it up a little. Besides that, as Reanimator said you build up speed really well so you should probably spend more time to get more accurate hits.