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well my tip is, if you are already doin the mouth stretched up by those wires, then teorathicaly they should have something to "grab" as you made them "grab" the back, the back part shouldn't be wide open
I have already seen this head i think twice..
The back make it more detailed like an actual head spillting.
Not a bad start!
I think there is a couple things that you could improve on to make it look better.
Firstly I think that you should move the top wire/hooks on either side of the mouth, up. So it's more in the top corners of the mouth.
Also I think you should make it look like the wires are really stretching open the mouth, you could do this by pulling the top and bottom corners of the mouth outwards more, to give it a bit of a stretching look.
Lastly, I think the gap in the back of the head should be, not so open.
It is kind of way too similar to Membrain's work here:
http://forum.toribash.com/showthread.php?t=159575
And stealing his idea isn't too great I think, especially when you have the choice of making something original.
The set is losely based on the character Chatterer from the Hellraiser movies.