the opener and first spin to the kick was great dude, though you should've fixed that arm twitch. the decap was great, but I think you should have reworked it so it sliced through the joint instead of just blunt hitting it, since it affected the momentum on the landing and transition to the cork. what I'm talking about is around frame 480 and onward, you're at average speed, and suddenly you accelerate, which wouldn't be bad if you stayed at that faster speed, but you slowed down on the cork. That, combined with how fast you contracted your leg after the kick, it looks awkward. you should also pay attention to the position of your arms, at frame 480 the way your right shoulder is raised and the elbow bent looked unnatural.
this last bit is just my personal preference and you can just ignore this if you want, but in most of your replays you do corks, and sure corks are nice to look at, but when it's seriously the only thing you do, it gets old pretty quick.
Last edited by Antleronio; Apr 20, 2013 at 08:21 AM.
Reason: Why do you have to illegally bump your replay thread wesm :c