I didn't like the freecaming at all, the keyframes were pretty choppy, and at the end replay, freecaming with mouse and WASD? That's just wrong. There's this great script that helps a lot, it's called BezCam, you should try it. Anyways, It looks like at the end replay, you wanted to avoid uke, but you still got him at 0:47, next time, try doing /opt uke 0 to disable uke or the second player if it's a mp replay. The shader you used is quite dark, but that would be a personal preference. I'm pretty sure you can do more in there, you just gotta spend a little more time on it.