There's still unfortunately a lot of bad stuff in this, but I think there is direct improvement from the last edit I posted here, so I'll just see what the community thinks of it.
Programs Used:
Fraps
After Effects
Windows
Habu (he helped lots with the cc, which is why it looks good)
Replays By: (in order)
-Largekilla
-Dezrai
-Datskip
-Oblivion
-Xioi
-Largekilla and Swexx
-Mack