Well, it could use some work.
The bottom of the head right now won't look too good in-game, it will be too low.
And below the face, it looks kinda like a mouth with a plate around it and under that is just like a chin or something? Anyways, I would erase the line that separates those two things and then add a V shade object instead.
The eyes don't match very well. It looks like you made a sketch of a rectangular shape, copied and pasted it, and then made it smaller and put it inside the bigger version and then made another shape inside the smaller shape. I would just erase the pupil, pr whatever you were trying to get at, and leave it like that.
Lots to work on. 6/10
EDIT: Adamant, KingBen, Demorid, TheCobra, did you read the first post? All of your posts will get you a one-way ticket to a report.