I also liked the opener, while yes its a little slow it did its job, and it did its job well.
transition to kick was really nice, a spin like that is hard to pull off (for me at least).
your dm combo was ok, but I felt that once you got to uke you were a bit "too" close to him, but your angles and power allowed you to get some dms so thats nice.
looks pretty good I'd say, keep up the good work