Okay, like april said, the opener seemed to be really slow, when you contracted your knee, i didn't take too kindly to it. that one leg movement bothered me,maybe find a better way to get into the position.
from 717 to 600 to me, looked sloppy, it wasn't a very good way transition to a jump towards uke.
The first boomhit looked off, mainly because you used your
knee instead of your
Foot to boom him with, you got too close to his chest area to do anything about that because of the spin...Skipping ahead...
What you did to get to uke's lower half seemed to be awkward and i wasn't so pleased with it. As you picked up his body, that looked okay i suppose. When you switched hands and then kicked, that looked okay as well. you coulda done something so your arm would faze inside of your leg.
The last boom kick, it seemed boring. Also It had such nice and precise aim to it, but in the end it the arm fazed into your leg and fucked up the look of the kick, in my eyes.
You got lazy and didn't bother to have your tori stand or do some kinda pose at the end of the replay.
I'll give it a 7/10, I've seen you do better.
Last edited by Dobby; Apr 24, 2013 at 12:16 AM.