Toribash
I can see why you're pretty happy with this one. The booms were pretty great and the posing was well done too.The only flaw I recognized is that the punch at the beginning look rather strange due to the way your wrist dragged to uke's arm for a little while.
I can see also. The pose and the dm's were fantastic. Your body was a bit stiff in the beginning but it's ok the replay is nice. 9.5/10 :P
Very good replay, only flaw is the stiffness in the beginning ^
9.8/10
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Woooot

Opener was really cool but the first punch looked a bit weird imo. And it wasn't clean at all. The booms looked awesome and really destructive but could have a little less grab. Pose was nicely balanced.
So that makes;
Opener: 10/10
First punch: 6/10
Booms: 8.5/10
Pose: 10/10
8,625/10
-0,5 for grabbing too much=
8,125/10
Wow, really nice replay.
Great booms.

Flaws:
Opener was abit stiff.
You had the same pose for your arm before punch pretty long witch made it look bad.


Yeah, that was mostly it.
Sexy replay bruh.
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Thanks for the comments and some C&C. I'm working on a replay atm and I got bored so I wanted to try some tricking and some spins. So I just did a random side flip or something? Be as harsh as you want to C&C me. First time doing something like this.
Attached Files
KenGee- Abrakdabra.rpl (82.2 KB, 20 views)
Abrakadrabra, CnC incomming.

Looked good.
Running was pretty generic... But still good.

Flaws:
The jump was a toe jump and looked way too fast.
You ghosted with your arm in mid-air two times.
Pose was kinda bad.



Still liked it tho.



*Requesting CnC.
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