* Pose needs work.
* Orc gradient looks bad
* Contrast between tori and the stock flame image is too high
* what's up with his head?
* tori is cropped out real badly. Don't use magic wand, maybe using shaders to green-screen would work
* again, the stock flame image
* bad concept
First things first fix your background, the flames need to be a bit brighter or just start with something more simplistic because it's really hard to make flames look good, they need to blend into another background for that.
Second, Get a better pose on your tori. In a nutshell, learn to play the game. Relax and hold work wonders.
If you can't crop propperly try matching shaders to your background
Just my attempt to help a bit. be aware that
it will still look like shit even if you do things somewhat "right". That's because it's copypasted out of fragments.
I used to do something very similiar to this, sadly it was back in like 2012 so the images got lost. Therefore no examples.
Just my 2 cents.
I AM NOT IMPLYING THAT ANY OF THIS WILL HELP
Last edited by Karolk; Feb 7, 2014 at 02:40 PM.