The opener was weird and I liked the little manip and You move really weird I liked the boom at the groins and boom at the chest and I liked the pose (kinda)

Overall i'll give you 8.6/10

Manip looked amazing.
Booms and other stuff was pure awesome!
Loved it.

10/10

pretty nice, although you gotta try being cleaner , I like the boom though
8/10

Nice booms,
Manip was Great.
I like the first kick.
Pose was good.

9/10

Booms were nice.
Opener was really awkward to me for some reason, but whatev's.

First kick boom was pretty sexy, so was the other 2. All I can say at this point was that it was pretty messy. It looked like you got good booms, but didn't care how you did them.

9/10.

Thanks for the comments guys. New replay.

Your replays are shit and idk how you got into ORMO.

JKJK great replays. Alcatraz, great replay, good movement, but you lacked a sense of, "a storyline" To me, it seemed like a bunch of random flips and kicks. Good movement, but you need to work on originality.

Banshee, strange kicks, strange spin. Strange name :P

Return of nautilus: Great replay, although the regrab moved uke and made it look weird.

lol keoni didnt comment on that advocatus diaboli replay.

return of the nautilus was super awesome. what's a manip? anyway, the booms were super awesome and it really had power in it. 9/10

advocatus diaboli was great, nice kicks and nice spin at the end. i liked the pose. 9/10 too.

I will make you my toribash idol for ever and ever.

Lol, that's not necessary but okay. Bump.

Advocatus Diaboli: Cool replay, but I don't like it much for one simple reason: Too generic.
Anyway, the opener was good, I like it.
The first kick was good but I've seen that millions of times.
The second kick was pretty cool and I liked it.
The decap was decent.
I loved the helicopter before the decap though.
The pose was really strange, I didn't like it.


IMO, you should start doing new stuff.
7.9/10