The opener was very slow. Instead of building some flow you just attacked uke and went for the split, which was original and whatnot, though I expected you could have at least gotten the core. I dislike the fact that instead of making a boom, you just made many single dms on uke's upper body. I also expected a dismemberment on the skeet, not to mention you had some weird moves to get into the pose. It would have been more fun to watch if you removed those 700 needless frames. 5/10
also, there's no way to find your style, it is naturally yours, therefore you just need to do the replays the way they please you, and that will be your style.
Last edited by Rial; Jan 23, 2013 at 05:46 PM.