Ashe's breasts don't *aline* with her collar bone.

Trundle looks great, especially the club and his clothes. But I don't like the idea of simply copying the reference image, you should have altred his pose. Ashe's face and breasts look weird too.
I like the edgy style a lot. Simple but eye-catching.

Trundle have another pose, feets, colors and i continued his body and other parts. I don't think that was "simply copying".