Toribash
Originally Posted by Fade View Post
something about the mouth bothers me man...

it might be how every other part has a black outline, and the mouth has a light pink one.

i know you're trying to go for the lips look but i think putting a thin black outline will make it more appealing

Originally Posted by WeooWeoo View Post
I believe the mouth is okay. But the nose. From the angle we see the whole face, the nose shouldn't be so, I guess you could say, angled to the right (our left).

Maybe make it a bigger nose and very red. Since that's his CocaCola branded look. If that's too much trouble this far down the road, leave as is. This looks great just like it is. Would just prefer a fatter nose that ain't angled. :v

Thanks for the CnC, continuing to do this head rn.

Edit: new WIP with shading and changed some parts.

3d preview



Flat

Last edited by Samuel; Jun 3, 2016 at 02:14 PM.
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Looks much better dude. It's looking a lot better now. Maybe make it a bit red as well just cuz he a jolly dude. That's just what id think. :P

edit: was wondering. do you use a mouse or use a stylist?
Last edited by WeooWeoo; Jun 11, 2016 at 06:20 AM.

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Originally Posted by dengue View Post
nice edit, I was going to ask why the nose was from side view

Originally Posted by WeooWeoo View Post
Looks much better dude. It's looking a lot better now. Maybe make it a bit red as well just cuz he a jolly dude. That's just what id think. :P

edit: was wondering. do you use a mouse or use a stylist?

Thanks for the CnC. I just used a mouse with a pen tool.
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