Toribash
Originally Posted by GrAmOf0n View Post
Neat.

The opener.....god dammit.....that's the most common and overused opener ever.
But ok...never mind.
Knee DM was ok. Nothing too spectacular. You executed it quite nicely.
Same goes for the follow up hip DM.
3rd kick was nice. Nothing much to say about it.
Transition to the boom was sweet. I liked the way you grabbed Uke just on the right place which allowed ya to get that boom.
Which was really neat. You could have gotten the decap though.
Pose was interesting. You ghosted your arm through your leg though. However, I don't find that a big issue.
Anyways, to wrap it up, this was pretty nice replay. Your DMs are really neat.
Keep up with the good work buddy, looking forward to seeing more replays by you.

Thanks mang, You got in ORMO?

Damn, I'm exactly on your level and you got in

I'll try joining tomorrow

Also thanks for giving me inspiration on joining in ORMO

EDIT: New replays up here

Decided to make a new version of a really old replay (Essence of Brutal Despair)

And a one shot replay for the first time I actually made one holy shit
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Hi, remade the "Pedestrious Anosamus" and got a 5-dm boom and didn't get the decap, still.

CnC plz
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Last edited by xjmc; Jun 27, 2015 at 11:34 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
No Other_

so,the opener is not dat fancy,i didn't liked the relaxed wrists but the lunch is cool,the head hit is awful and the elbow dq is nothing special with the head r just 2 dms i guess u could done a lot more with something else the second kick is just 1 dm boom u could done 2 or more and the 3rd kick is meh just a normal split,nice pose btw.
the replay is cool but there r some problems with the opener movements and the hits r nothing special this replay should has a boom or something else but nice 3 kicks combo 7/10 (-1 for the relaxed wrists and for the opener and -2 for the awful hits).
Last edited by NICOLAS135; Jul 5, 2015 at 04:32 PM.
ok
Originally Posted by NICOLAS135 View Post
so,the opener is not dat fancy,i didn't liked the relaxed wrists but the lunch is cool,the head hit is awful and the elbow dq is nothing special with the head r just 2 dms i guess u could done a lot more with something else the second kick is just 1 dm boom u could done 2 or more and the 3rd kick is meh just a normal split,nice pose btw.
the replay is cool but there r some problems with the opener movements and the hits r nothing special this replay should has a boom or something else but nice 3 kicks combo 7/10 (-1 for the relaxed wrists and for the opener and -2 for the awful hits).

Can you please refer the replay you're talking about?
kickin' free:
opener is common but i'm ok with it
didn't like how your hand skid along the ground at around 220
you lowered your arms too early for the cork
the cork didn't have much vertical speed too
no pose

no other:
no opener, going straight to a double knee was pretty bleh
your glute was too extended at 420
i like the 1st kick
the 2nd and 3rd kicks could've had more potential to dm
Originally Posted by sSLight View Post
kickin' free:
opener is common but i'm ok with it
didn't like how your hand skid along the ground at around 220
you lowered your arms too early for the cork
the cork didn't have much vertical speed too
no pose

no other:
no opener, going straight to a double knee was pretty bleh
your glute was too extended at 420
i like the 1st kick
the 2nd and 3rd kicks could've had more potential to dm

It was rather hard for me to do a pose because I was in a horizontal-like state so I'd rather not do a pose as it will look messy or crappy

(Kickin' Free)