I find it very talented for a first head.. I just think you need some more practice and techniques, maybe look some up on Google or ask somebody and they can give you some tips. But over all for a first head, I like it.

Not very bad for your first try. I don't really understand the cracks though,metal normally has scratches not cracks. I also like the way the eyes fit in but the way you used light and dark silver lets the head down abit.

I have made a set

Not bad, could se a little bit more red, like on the legs.

Wow, love it. Wish you could make the head as good as the rest.
Well done, good work.