Toribash
Originally Posted by TomPaine View Post
I would move the white circles more toward the center of the face
5-10 pixels or so.

Nah,it's supposed to look like that.
WON THORN'S TOURNEY
uh don't make the pigtail stroke thicker? Thin them out.

Also the X on top of her back hair as seen on the clip is missing.
Jalis: Freelancer, you're a duck | Sachi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Reanimator: Freelancer, you're a duck
satiknee: Freelancer, you're a duck | Wiggi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Tarlan: Freelancer, you're a duck


I won't thin the pigtails,i fend them cool as they are.
So is this a finished product?
WON THORN'S TOURNEY
thin the pigtails slightly then. Also X is a bit too thick too, same there, just slightly not much.

As they look way off right now.
Jalis: Freelancer, you're a duck | Sachi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Reanimator: Freelancer, you're a duck
satiknee: Freelancer, you're a duck | Wiggi: Freelancer, you're a duck | Tarlan: Freelancer, you're a duck
The eyes are too wide, and there is a small yellow/pink-is line over her pupils by the hair.

Other than that I can't see anything wrong.

I like the simplicity and that it is a power puff girl.

Edit: And the iris is touching the sides of the eye, doesn't look good imo.
I like it this way. :<
But since it's head for you...I'll just send it to you and you edit the way you like it.

E:Tamashii,actually there's not.
Don't know why it looks like on that sphere,tho.
WON THORN'S TOURNEY