This is pretty good for first video, but you could improve a lot.
1. You should add some shaders.
2. You should use free cam.
3. You should synchronize the replays with music.
4. You should get some better replays(some of them were really noobish).
5. You should add some effects, make better transitions, etc.
6. Delete that logo, or at least make it less observable.
Yeah... there is a lot of things you should learn to really start doing toribash videos...
For now I rate this video 4/10.