Endurance Onslaught 6.0
Originally Posted by SuckerPunch View Post
Really dislike the head. Mohawk looks pasty, like it was some bad party costume. I like the eyes. it lacks shading. needs lots more detail

Might redo the mohawk, it depends on how free I am but yes, I agree with you. Where do you think the shading should go?

Originally Posted by etoria View Post
the black needs more detail, it could be like hug's old set. Put more stuff in the black.

Like Hug's old set? What do you mean?

Originally Posted by mikey6497 View Post
The hair beside the Mohawk seems a little far back try to move it forward a bit that would be nice.

Thanks for that, I will most likely be making some changes to the head and will definitely take this account. It does look a little too high.

Here's a new update on the set:

Right leg

Last edited by iAwesome; Mar 17, 2014 at 05:37 PM.
I think the head could be ALOT better imo.
The legs look fine, but you could put more effort into the characters.
Adding more details to them and cleaning them up would help a lot.
I really enjoy your cartoon art style, but I just think you should put apply more effort.

Thanks Yoki. :>

Many people are unhappy with the head so I might redo it. Cleaning up in what sense? I'm actually trying to put more emphasis on the purple colour so I wasn't really planning to make a background or anything like that.

#Guitar boy WIP 2

Last edited by iAwesome; Mar 18, 2014 at 03:07 PM.
His arms are pretty disproportionate.
And his belt area is really small. :o
Ryan is Straight {TGS} {Videoer} {Artist} Rip Dog
Finished the entire thing. Selling it here.

I was going to redo the head, but I thought it fit well and I'm just too busy these days. Enjoy.

Warning: Many screenshots