colour correction was sloppy, theres more to it than just upping the concentration and exposure. suggest you look it up.
and check some cool text tutorials for sigs out for photoshop/gimp. the default black text looks is annoying. you want to see the text, but you dont want it to distract you.
considering those where the two major edits to the vid, id like to see more effort put into them.
the switchy camera thing was ok, not really sure how one would improve it.
overall, it was a fun vid to watch, but the edits didnt really add anything to it.