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Add some shadows, lower the visor, add a mouthgaurd along with some sort of joint at the back to hold it on, add more detail to the back sides & front, colour the visor, maybe do some metal coming over the visor..

(some of these are already mentioned)
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Originally Posted by molik14 View Post

Are you serious?

I'm always serious!

But only if it has the suggested changes. If you didn't listen much to suggestions, then there isn't really a need for an art WIP thread :]
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I second that DJ!
Hows the head coming?
I actually really want to see it ;)
Also malvado what you suggested about the mouthguard is really quite like my newest head. (check the armor robot thread).
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Originally Posted by airbust View Post
you really need to darker it it looks so clean

What's wrong with clean and perfect?

I, for one, am a fan of perfection :>

I hope eventually, the entire head would be covered in Relevant details, so it looks less like it's sitting on top of a sphere and more like it forms the sphere itself.

I guess you didn't get to work on the visor this time. Hopefully next time?
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what i mean by clean is that there isnt enough detail (darkering it will make it seem like its damage,its stylish)
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