get better replays, they were slow and repetitive
Thorn
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k i understand xDDD
i already changed the song
now ill add some more replays...
faster ones...
better ones...
and all you guys
plz dont say it again i know xDDD
Great, another person using this song. Now I can't use it.
PS: I was first to use it, even though the video sucked.
To the actual subject, though, you used the start of the song in a crappy way. The tempo feels off, you didn't use its full potential and you're using an ugly font.
Seriously, use a song like this and you'll have to do it well. Not a good song for a "first timer". Definitely a great song for a meaningful video, but...
EDIT: ...you already changed it. So I have nothing else to say. Good luck with your video.