What program you use?
If you use gimp then i can help you out.
also tuts will help you have you tried any tutorials?
especially lilmali's eye tut.

I don't enjoy the whole emo hair textures etc.

But you're way better than I was/am. Well done.

Thxs Peter.
What styles are you into in texturing, i enjoy cartoonish/Anime texts.
I cant do that robotic stuff too difficult D:

i love the eyes and the emtions. but 1 thing i believe u should move the face higher up.

8/10

Thxs.
I'm take that into action next time.
the face is kinda low.
Look what i made for my Shop!

The 2nd one is much better than the first one. Try adding more highlights/lowlights in the hair to make it appear less blank. Maybe add a small drop shadow? The face is overall pretty well mapped. The eyes are done well. Work on the other facial features though. Try lowering the mouth tiny bit because the cheek is like right in his eye. Maybe rotate that side down a little. Hope this helps. Good luck!

look really good for a first try 8/10

Thxs mate.!