Originally Posted by MegaCash

Wait, youve NEVER Played a first gen pokemon game?

Originally Posted by NoCheerios

Also, box, if I were to write a story about Pokemon, I'd expect those interested in what happened to be people at least fairly knowledgeable of the Pokemon universe, not some random person browsing creepypasta.

Moreover, if you've never played Pokemon before, or don't know enough about it to know what a Silph Scope is(not that it's a major plot point or anything anyway), you probably shouldn't give a damn about what happened. The target audience would be those who could reflect on their precious childhood gaming sessions and be horrified at what's been contorted here.

Most importantly, though, don't comment on Hyde's writing skill or ask him to make improvements; he didn't even write this.

Originally Posted by box

even though that is possible and likely

To be interested in a Pokemon creepypasta when you know nothing about Pokemon? Maybe that's the case for you, but saying it's likely doesn't sound right.

again, there are other people that can be interested in pokemon creepypastas but not the games itself.

Maybe you're interested, but it obviously won't/didn't have the same effect on you as it did to people who actually knew what he was talking about.

i know he didn't write it, you've simply misdirected my implications

'You' is a pretty vague personal pronoun. When used in forums, especially when criticizing writing, I can only assume that it's directed at the OP.