Thank you that you stood in my defense

about mouth i know, but its way easier to do it like i made, im not great, or even good artist so its too hard to me :3

It looks alright so far, but I think you should make things... bigger and more messed up because right now it looks like a trapezium with random stuff inside it. It's also kinda hard to see at first sight what is in that trapezium, maybe you should make the teeth whiter or something. Also, why is there a giant red penis on the back of it?

i think that size is ok. i will add some mess, its ony wip, and i want to do it at the end of work

about "penis" i took shape from this picture:

I like were its going, based on the real deal, i'd say brighten the mouth a bit, its very dull right now, nothing really pops out.
Keep working on it, its looking good.
And as stated before make the back a little more detailed.

what detalies on the back do u mean?

The eye is too Simple.. but Nice..
and U make many Scary head.. i was scared man..
5/10 i think

i dont have any idea how to improve eyes...
but its only wip

off topic
do u really think that this one is worse than orc one? i dont think so ;d