New replay

been practicing more in SP. a split cap thing or whatever

another bump

this replay. (yes, it's torisex.tbm)

Great job with that, though I was expecting more crotch destruction. Maybe try turning that first crotch hit into a 3 or 4 DM boom.

thanks wes, it's just really hard to get any good dms with the crotch.
practicing parkour herp derp (i know the walking/running sucks, I'm working on it)

Don't take my word for it since I can't even do that, but you should try to make your movements more fluid as well as getting that jump higher. Maybe you could try not to fall on your head on the first jump? I give it a 7.2/10.

Do.

Dont: I didn't like the opener that much. It looked like you paused in the middle of it.
The Manipulation was neat, and the hit following that was really nice.
It's easy to see that you are improving quite a bit. Keep it up!

I agree with Lucid I didnt like the opener. I did like the rest of the replay though. The pose was pretty good and I like how you kicked the arm because I can never split apart the limbs.