1:58: That music switch is something you should work on. Try to just fade one out and the other one in right after, dont mix them.
2:10: Too slow, way too slow. You should've just go full retard and throw that camera around, spice it up with different angles, short cuts and some light effects. That drop is way to nice to use a slow sequence.
2: 36-2:45: that freeze frame has been a bit to long for my taste, you could've added something, like a well synced glow or something to make it more interesting.
2:50: nice synced, but you should've sped it up after that dm
Remember: all of the above is just a statement of my own taste, which may differ from yours. So just take it as a constructivly ment CnC, not an insult ;)
Everything else was just great in my opinion, rly enjoyed watching it the 3 times ;)
Keep going dude