Looks like it could use some hair, or some sort of detail to it, and not just eyes and colored skin.

New WIP add

LLDN:
what tool are you using?Mouse or Pen Tablet?

Im using the tablet

You can do a lot better than this.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rppoDt0VJDg
Just watch more videos like this, and paint.

Thanks, I will watch