just remove that smoke effect on : 30 it's really bad ruins everything in that replay srsly.
on :47 camera work and atmosphere is beautiful
maybe exppected some coool shit at the drop of the beat at 1:05, but umm it's ok. though a bit out of sync.
1:12..camera was bit lacking and the replay after as well.. i think it should be bit more dynamic with that kind of power. it's ok but maybe trying something else won't hurt.
good job as usual, this could turns out to be one of ur best
OH AND FONT IS STILL THE SAME YOU LAZY GUY ;P ima keep buggin u about that till u change it ;p
on :47 camera work and atmosphere is beautiful
maybe exppected some coool shit at the drop of the beat at 1:05, but umm it's ok. though a bit out of sync.
1:12..camera was bit lacking and the replay after as well.. i think it should be bit more dynamic with that kind of power. it's ok but maybe trying something else won't hurt.
good job as usual, this could turns out to be one of ur best
OH AND FONT IS STILL THE SAME YOU LAZY GUY ;P ima keep buggin u about that till u change it ;p
Your messed up world enthrills me
Great. One thing, add a proper introduction. I can see what you're trying to do, you're trying to emotionally attach us with the video with that music. You know what would really help? Landscape shots, closeups, anything to change up the subject. One thing i would advise, is not to start any video off with replays, unless its a player showcase. Before you show any replays, you should include some video shots of a tori sitting on a box, or a closeup of the tori's face. Small things like these will make your video go a long way. If you look at videos like taylor swift's music video, you will see she takes up an entire 3 minutes just to establish the mood, then to go into the music. Its a magical moment when a video artist like yourself can do these sort of things.
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Originally Posted by keoni109
Great. One thing, add a proper introduction. I can see what you're trying to do, you're trying to emotionally attach us with the video with that music. You know what would really help? Landscape shots, closeups, anything to change up the subject. One thing i would advise, is not to start any video off with replays, unless its a player showcase. Before you show any replays, you should include some video shots of a tori sitting on a box, or a closeup of the tori's face. Small things like these will make your video go a long way. If you look at videos like taylor swift's music video, you will see she takes up an entire 3 minutes just to establish the mood, then to go into the music. Its a magical moment when a video artist like yourself can do these sort of things.
I understand what do you want to mean and i share your ideas. But I prefer to keep that kind of idea for futur projects, like Brother of Agility 3 ;)
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smoke still kinda non fitting..but i guess that's ur choice
1:11 1: 33 lovely effect,really works well with the vid!
that shader change was fucking genius on 2:01
font changed maybe??but u need to use a different color ewww
overall: this is a new style of vids from you and you're making it work really well!
1:11 1: 33 lovely effect,really works well with the vid!
that shader change was fucking genius on 2:01
font changed maybe??but u need to use a different color ewww
overall: this is a new style of vids from you and you're making it work really well!
Your messed up world enthrills me
(love that smiley). I agree for the smoke, i am still working on it ;) Thanks for comment.
