The actual fire looks god, but i don't like the composition of this.
This is what i mean by that:
1 - the huge blank negative spaces don't really work here. I'd recommend that you use a dark shader for taking your stock screenies.
2 - The fire render needs warping to get in perspective with the floor, and needs a little more done to make it look 3 dimensional.
3 - the pose dosen't really work, and with the default shaders, bright red and blue joints look a bit.. sh*te, tbh.
This is what i mean by that:
1 - the huge blank negative spaces don't really work here. I'd recommend that you use a dark shader for taking your stock screenies.
2 - The fire render needs warping to get in perspective with the floor, and needs a little more done to make it look 3 dimensional.
3 - the pose dosen't really work, and with the default shaders, bright red and blue joints look a bit.. sh*te, tbh.
Thanks Harlequin for the constructive criticism =]
Ill take that in mind for the next time I do something like this
Ill take that in mind for the next time I do something like this
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It didn't interact with the character much. All you did was just put fire under him and cut out where the leg was, it's not too impressive, but for a beginner it's good. Keep up the good work.