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Opener was genericish, and I don't like how you tapped your leg before going to the spin. The spin itself was amazing, flowed really well to the boom. You kinda killed your flow after that to get the leg grab, and the crotch kick didn't look that impressive for some reason, needs more style. The decap was meh, didn't flow much, like the movement to the pose.
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Oh finally. Thanks Datskip.

Like I said, I will improve replays until they are perfect. I'll edit the replay from the boom.
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The opener...well I don't really have anything much to say to that except that I've seen it quite often. That foot tap also made it look worse. The spin, as datskip said, looked really amazing and flowed well into the boom. The crotch kick transition wasn't as spectacular as the spin and I was a little skeptical about that decap.
Last edited by SparChar; Nov 10, 2013 at 08:19 AM. Reason: damn grammar mistake
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