that was better, but the original is still better IMHO. I just don't like the two common things in those "dance remixes": the forearm ghosts through the thigh and at some time, you take that symmetrical glutes extended, hips contracted position.
I'd just love even like simple or somehow otherwise useless, but similar-looking long sweepkicks with some rotation in between to make them (near-) lateral.
by the way, wanna return the favor, I've helped your thread keep up single-handed for a few times, I'd really appreciate one comment on mine to keep it on the first page. it's not old, but new ones are pushing it down. and I'm sorta tipping you on good replays here, too, at least everyone who's seen them would agree (according to their comments)
sorry for advertisement, I quess I'll remove it if you want to. anyone else, like usual, watch his first, then watch mine if this got you interested.