It's not a latex bodysuit- it's a loose coat.
But yes, the back detail need alignment - but first I need to find the shape of the back
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Now I need to figure out why she started to lean forward... maybe that's natural considering she's twisting her upper body to look back at you.. probably is.

Anyway I will place the hidden arm on her hip with thumb and all that shit - because I can. But that's in the future...

She's actually falling forward because someone approached her from behind (probably some hidden commandos while she was on the watch) and broke her neck twisting her head abruptly from right to left.

Maybe she had some nice memory of her lover in the same moment when that happened which explains the 'frozen smile'. At least it happened quickly, she almost felt nothing.



Seriously man, you have to go to square one and start fixing many things.
Don't start painting until you do.

Actually, I just noted that I photographed the canvas skewed, it's not that bad, but still bad .. Yes Django, I would never start painting without being able to look at it and feel good.
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plus anatomy isn't my strong side, heh, I don't think I've drawn any anatomy for many years...

Have you thought about composition? Top of her head is very close to the edge of the canvas. That's not a good thing.

What will be in front of her? I guess some part of the landscape, maybe futuristic?

Some planing ahead on the canvas before the painting is a must.

Here is an example of probable composition:



So, lets say you draw a futuristic cityscape. Observer can 'enter' the image through her figure, follow the gun, rest his eyes on the tall buildings and then go down the road. Or, he can 'enter' the city by road, follow to diagonal to the gun and rest the eyes on her figure. Stuff like that...

I always draw something like that with graphite pen before even thinking about the rough sketch. Paintings have to be planned three steps ahead.

I never start painting without a plan. She is standing on a cliff, telling her friend behind her (the viewer): "look" a magnificent view over a deserted overgrown town. Your sketch makes a really boring painting. I understand that you feel like bashing the basics at me because I don't do much work like this, but please step the level of your advice up a notch. I'm not stupid.
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lol, ok... Good luck with your painting.


So, touchy...

The nose looks WAY to low. It honestly looks it five inches from the eyes when in reality it should be right under. them

this is how i would go on about it. ''my'' anatomy aint 100% correct i just scribbled this. HOPE IT HELPS!
(Your O'G deltoid was waaaaay too long)

Nice, thank you, I'll see if it's possible to save this, seeing that there are so many errors, Thank you so much, I will study what you did, match it with anatomy pictures, trying to make her larger with masculine shapes. This is the last time I painted a person with the clothes on from the very beginning...