Gah, what a beautiful poem, ruined with the number thrown in XD.
I thought the opener was cool, and I like what you did with it, though you did ghost. I think that the last spin could have been nicer, but that's ok because you did a real smexy dance afterwards.
10/10 would shower you with $1 bills (except that I'm Canadian, so you'd have to settle with being peppered by loonies.