Originally Posted by donkabots
you're replay are pretty good for someone that is just starting, but I recommend you look at other replays from outstanding replay makers (largekilla - swexx) and try to incorporate what makes their replays so good. You want to avoid being stiff and it will look a lot better.
Thanks random white belt.
I'm just gamin' man
quicksplit:
The opener was okeee. Not too generic, which is good.
The next section was done pretty well, but I feel like you could have accomplished the same feat with less grab, gaining more style points (personal preference) and power possibly.
That brings me to the hit. Again, pretty standard split. I feel like you may be able to get a bigger hit with some editing, though.
your thread seems spammy, watch out for the GM police
The opener was okeee. Not too generic, which is good.
The next section was done pretty well, but I feel like you could have accomplished the same feat with less grab, gaining more style points (personal preference) and power possibly.
That brings me to the hit. Again, pretty standard split. I feel like you may be able to get a bigger hit with some editing, though.
your thread seems spammy, watch out for the GM police
Originally Posted by LucidSpore
quicksplit:
The opener was okeee. Not too generic, which is good.
The next section was done pretty well, but I feel like you could have accomplished the same feat with less grab, gaining more style points (personal preference) and power possibly.
That brings me to the hit. Again, pretty standard split. I feel like you may be able to get a bigger hit with some editing, though.
your thread seems spammy, watch out for the GM police
Spammy? Eh... I don't know how to fix that... does it matter if I chat with the people who critique me?
I'm just gamin' man
