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It's pretty good. However the shockwave could be a bit lower, and it stands out too much over the rest of the picture and could be blended a bit more.

Make tori's face a bit more defined. There's a brush stroke over it or something which distorts/blurs it.

Also, left hand side 2/3's down. See that dark spot? Get rid of it or put something over it. It's an eyesore.
Since when did I become Asian?