It starts well, but is still pretty stiff. It doesn't have any obvious fail moves, but it's just lacking in that nice relaxed and smooth style. It ends up looking like a normal madman, the kind of which you see a lot nowadays. I'd give it a 5/10, quite average.
I think it would improve your replays a lot if you could work on the stiffyness, otherwise it sometimes looks like your tori has constipation.