The first kick is nice. Good fluidity. The other two (one and a half?) kicks were kinda... eh. You didn't you any of the momentum you built up. Which is lame. You probably could've pulled off a nice boom.
8/10 no-ones gonna be mean about that flowed nicely and very precise
i was experimenting and came across a heli kick. in the original version (posted on my thread) it split him in half but i edited it so i could post it here