what i didn't really like in this replay is the opener coz it was generic af.
manipulation was good but try to do fast spins to get enough power for spining uke.
also dont puch uke's torso instead if he got enough spin and you need to raise him up.
the lack of syle isn't a good thing aswell but its going to be fixed with a bit more of practicing.
at all not bad for someone who doesn't make manips
gj

Getting good so far.
Just keep on hitting them low spots or whatever to get Uke on the spin. Try to add more momentum to each transition hits, don't add too much that it will DM tho; add more speed.
Just a lil more polish here and there. Gj so far tho.



It's been a while since I've done a manip, I might whip some up for you tho, Idk why too. C

Thank you guys. Manip again for opener challenge

My best replay ever, i am surprised but still a wip. comments plz and ignore the last part.

NICE

that manipulation was fabulous, try to avoid using too much grab and bumping your head, you could get more momentum from you actual manipulation hits

I'm not gonna cnc the entire thing, cause I'm way too lazy, but it's good

Thank you. Also don't worry about the cnc, i am most looking for short comments on my replays now ;)

Arakata, my friend, you just gave me enough inspiration to make my Monthly Opener Challenge a manip as well.

Heck, you did a fine job with transitions.
Head bumps aren't good, try moving your neck in flow of your tori's movement and position. (Who the f--- am I kidding? It's not like you haven't tried that before or anything.)
2MuchGrabsRemindsMeofXuoAndScyther11.
I know you had some pauses, but they were still sexy af, liking the idea of mixing manip with tricking for that last part tho.
Iz good, hot stuff, k bye, I'm dead again.

Yeah, as stated before, you're grabbing way too much, and while everything looks great movement-wise, grabs are a cheesy way to keep him in the air, and they kinda destroy the over-all quality of the replay.

Also, Uke hits the floor twice during the manip. No-no!

The manips is fucking insane


I love it to bits. Only problem is that your movement is kinda lacking, it's to much all over the Place and looks quirky.


Try and look more into making flowy shit,

If you combine that with your insane manips it's gonna be porn worthy

Thank you guys. I will try to cnc back tomorrow
well, i finished the replay and sorry for the bad hits. i tryed during a long time but its too hard for me, so i decided do a simple thing