Um... Should I let this stay alive?

Your replay has some really good hits, but you kill your flow by being stiff in many cases.

For example at around 772 your whole arm is stiff, try relaxing it.

Also it is a bit too grabby for my liking. Try and grab only when you are going for massive booms or self damage booms etc.

Skeet was alright.

You need to work on your overall style and flow. You pretty much have the dm part down, then all you need to do is execute them properly and in a style that you like.

You'll make it into ormo (if you still want) in a very short time if you keep making replays and working on the things I have stated above.

Good luck

Starting with an opener like that and then grabbing like that is almost as bad as if you had kicked his chest.
The grab looked very wonky.
The knee kick didn't look very well with the grab, the boomhit was a bit better though.
The next boomhit was meh, predictable pattern.
I liked the self damage, and the skeets were okay too, but your movement was blargh.