My initial reaction was actually a lot of emotion. The face seems so normal, such a normal chick, looking out at the viewer. Sometimes when art portrays something so normal, not picture perfect but "normal" then it can omit something other-worldly.
I like the mouth heaps, I think that's awesome, plus the re edit of the eyes, looks muuuch better rounded pupils rather than before.

Good to see that I leave an impression.

Yep, won't edit this anymore, finished product:
http://zetpk.deviantart.com/#/d56rkbn

If anyone wants to be drawn PM me!

PM'd You about that, hehe :P Bojan draw me once. I am curious how You will do