I'll comment on the i'm a monster replay, since the ones for the event had bad challanges that I don't like.
Your movement in the opener seemed a bit too heavy at first. The 2dm kick was nice, but I think it could have been more destructive. I liked the style of the throw though, and the jump wasn't half bad but it was stiff in mid air. The boom wasn't too stylish, and the decap was bad because it became too messy. I did like the idea of the skeet there though and the pose was also good.
Overall, work on your style, stiffness and keeping the flow.