Toribash
jumps
yellow flashes
3 minutes
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

you should probably avoid moving too far out of your box if its going to be longer than 1 minute
this felt really cheesy. really really cheesy.


yellow flash for cheese effect
got bored after 1 minute, repetitive song with repetitive replays followed up by a repetitive yellow flash that doesn't ever stop

the "we ain't the same" text looks so out of place from the BG
shader at 1:00 hurt my eyes
camera work was dull, whenever a spar replay appeared i was hoping for some close camera angles to make it more interesting but it was way zoomed out the whole video

what did you try to achieve with the effect at 2:43? it would be ok if it happened at one place, if matched nicely with the song, but you basically just put it stationary for the whole replay and all it does is irritate my eyes

i liked how you switched between the three characters in the outro
Last edited by zeto; Aug 6, 2014 at 04:04 AM.
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srry but this video isn't very good

It's like what, 3 minutes of replays with mediocre keyframes and yellow flashes in sync with the (crappy) song's pop noises? It doesn't help that you used garbage overlays and gross font.