The skeet looks great, and the pose is not that bad already.
I like it, except for the grab DMs, I forgot to say that on the first WIP.
People don't like grab DMs because they are easier to get and look messy.
I don't have anything against grabbing, my replays are very grab-heavy, but grab DMs on the other hand...
Don't delete the replay, it's pretty good for now.