Yea, its better, but in my opinion for a real madman their should be more dismemberments, but I suppose its however you take the style 'madman' in, some may think of it as just moving 'madly' as in fast and confusing, but I always thought of it as trying to get as many dismemberments as possible as fast as possible, while still looking cool, but not obsessing over perfect flow, although I usually end the replay slowly so that it all comes to a nice ending.
Also it seems that in some of your hits you changed your mind at the last second and made them different, try to think the hit through and then just edit it until it works out the way you planned. The opening kick looks rather unimpressive and slow as well, almost as if the kick was meant to be hit with the other leg, but then you just rapidly extend the left one..