Overall, not very good. You have no flow whatsoever, and your movements are very twitchy. Now for the good things. You have good thoughts, as I can see some combo-ish stuff you do. Tips on how to improve, hmm....... Only thing I can reccomend is to watch other peoples replays. When I mean other people's replays, i mean go to the ORMO replay thread and see awzumness. Also, try to get dms without grabbing. I am not saying you cant do that, but try not to grab for the entire replay.