Embers

In most cases, I'm not a fan of melty openers but this had character for some reason.
However, it could've used an extra second or two in that dropped position.

The jump was very smooth and stylish, not very much rotation but it didn't need it for it
to be cool. It looked aggressive somehow. Although from 330 to 300,
your left arm sucked.

I loved the landing. Kept the flow brilliantly. The spins proceeding were ok, but again,
one of your arms from 230 to 200 was spazzed. That was the only problem though,
the fluidity is amazing.

The final spin thing before the kick was very stylish, I like the speed and how
immediately after the decapitation you 'extend all' kinda and slow it right down.

I'm not much bothered about booms or dms actually.. I think that the style
is more important. It had one dm, and that was all that as needed.

The pose sucks I'm afraid.

8/10, just make sure your arms arent freaking out everywhere.

I'm not fabulous at poses but thanks a lot.
The arm thingie is sort of a habit. I don't really focus on it until I actually need it.

Damn I hate double posting.