Its good, but not that good.
Things you could improve on is getting the tori to flow with the music a big more
instead of switching scenes every 5 seconds cause that de-synconizes the music and the movement made by the tori.
other improvements you could of done is adjust the lighting in the video,
the camera flare makes it a bit hard to see the tori and the shadows is too much and covers up much of the detail and really hard to see the tori.
Other things I think would be great to the video is if you change it to first person once and a while instead of recording in one position. Also the
smoke effect is pretty cool but you should make it a bit more visible in the video. In the future maybe you could change the landscape or something
and texturize the floor and give it a setting.
but overall not bad.
Things you could improve on is getting the tori to flow with the music a big more
instead of switching scenes every 5 seconds cause that de-synconizes the music and the movement made by the tori.
other improvements you could of done is adjust the lighting in the video,
the camera flare makes it a bit hard to see the tori and the shadows is too much and covers up much of the detail and really hard to see the tori.
Other things I think would be great to the video is if you change it to first person once and a while instead of recording in one position. Also the
smoke effect is pretty cool but you should make it a bit more visible in the video. In the future maybe you could change the landscape or something
and texturize the floor and give it a setting.
but overall not bad.
Last edited by JackerFx; Apr 19, 2013 at 03:57 AM.
1. IDK what is the purpose of the vid, is it just showing largekilla's good videos?
2. less narrative, do you rlly just want to show largekilla's good videos? I mean, yeah I've seen your vid such as brother of agility etc. Those videos have a good narrative wich make us want to know "Oh sshii, he lost. what will happen to the f*cking world if he died?" and a good narrative also make us emotional "F*ck off demon! you can't beat him just give up!" and this video, IN MY OPINION, it's boring
3. is it a combine plot? I mean the video is like solo trick-parkour-destroying uke-spar with uke-parkour, you didn't pick it randomly right?
4. in 27-30 there are 2 suns/light source. it's kinda confusing especially the little sun. it shows from out of no where and it's kinda shocking me, in fact when it shows I was like "what's that?" I don't lie. why? becoz it's like Boom! a little sun comes up and reflecting a light.
5. for the music, unfortunately, my speakers are crashed so I can't hear it
-I like the bg wich is fit to largekilla's tori, I mean his set and his joints
-nice camera movement
*NOTE : you were asking for our opinion so this is my opinion, don't be angry.
2. less narrative, do you rlly just want to show largekilla's good videos? I mean, yeah I've seen your vid such as brother of agility etc. Those videos have a good narrative wich make us want to know "Oh sshii, he lost. what will happen to the f*cking world if he died?" and a good narrative also make us emotional "F*ck off demon! you can't beat him just give up!" and this video, IN MY OPINION, it's boring
3. is it a combine plot? I mean the video is like solo trick-parkour-destroying uke-spar with uke-parkour, you didn't pick it randomly right?
4. in 27-30 there are 2 suns/light source. it's kinda confusing especially the little sun. it shows from out of no where and it's kinda shocking me, in fact when it shows I was like "what's that?" I don't lie. why? becoz it's like Boom! a little sun comes up and reflecting a light.
5. for the music, unfortunately, my speakers are crashed so I can't hear it
-I like the bg wich is fit to largekilla's tori, I mean his set and his joints
-nice camera movement
*NOTE : you were asking for our opinion so this is my opinion, don't be angry.
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Originally Posted by JackerFx
Its good, but not that good.
Things you could improve on is getting the tori to flow with the music a big more
instead of switching scenes every 5 seconds cause that de-synconizes the music and the movement made by the tori.
other improvements you could of done is adjust the lighting in the video,
the camera flare makes it a bit hard to see the tori and the shadows is too much and covers up much of the detail and really hard to see the tori.
Other things I think would be great to the video is if you change it to first person once and a while instead of recording in one position. Also the
smoke effect is pretty cool but you should make it a bit more visible in the video. In the future maybe you could change the landscape or something
and texturize the floor and give it a setting.
but overall not bad.
Thanks for your comments. For your switching scenery and camera shadow, i just don't know what you are talking about. Are we talking about the same video ?
Recording in first person SUCKS. That's make a lot of bugs and the perspective is wrong.
Texturize the ground... >_>' ... I will just say nothing about that.
Originally Posted by iPoor
1. IDK what is the purpose of the vid, is it just showing largekilla's good videos?
2. less narrative, do you rlly just want to show largekilla's good videos? I mean, yeah I've seen your vid such as brother of agility etc. Those videos have a good narrative wich make us want to know "Oh sshii, he lost. what will happen to the f*cking world if he died?" and a good narrative also make us emotional "F*ck off demon! you can't beat him just give up!" and this video, IN MY OPINION, it's boring
3. is it a combine plot? I mean the video is like solo trick-parkour-destroying uke-spar with uke-parkour, you didn't pick it randomly right?
4. in 27-30 there are 2 suns/light source. it's kinda confusing especially the little sun. it shows from out of no where and it's kinda shocking me, in fact when it shows I was like "what's that?" I don't lie. why? becoz it's like Boom! a little sun comes up and reflecting a light.
5. for the music, unfortunately, my speakers are crashed so I can't hear it
-I like the bg wich is fit to largekilla's tori, I mean his set and his joints
-nice camera movement
*NOTE : you were asking for our opinion so this is my opinion, don't be angry.
So, you are saying the video is boring because there isnt any scenario.... But, it is a "music video" and you havent any speakers... So, first, watch the video in REAL conditions before starting commenting.
Sorry guys, i have nothing with all kind of comments, but your both comments are pretty weirds.
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Oh god, those last two comments. Really guys? really!?
-implying that every vid needs a narrative not to be boring
-implying that you should keep the scene for 1minute so it runs with the music?(idk wtf ur talking about, it fits fine)
-implying that recording in first person is actually!(guess what it's not!)
-implying that every vid needs a narrative not to be boring
-implying that you should keep the scene for 1minute so it runs with the music?(idk wtf ur talking about, it fits fine)
-implying that recording in first person is actually!(guess what it's not!)
Your messed up world enthrills me
